没有想到自己也会用楚辞来作诗,还能把诗作得那么押韵。就连我自己也佩服我自己。就在爷爷的八十岁大寿上,我做了这首诗献给爷爷,有人能看出诗中的含义吗?
今夕庆生八十年,兰芷萧艾布满间。
宓妃佚女勤祝寿,其愿即可表日月。
飘风云霓不落后,吾代他人表心愿。
祝您长命又百岁,并且健康亿万年。
今夕庆生八十年,兰芷萧艾布满间。
宓妃佚女勤祝寿,其愿即可表日月。
飘风云霓不落后,吾代他人表心愿。
祝您长命又百岁,并且健康亿万年。
*A more complete view and reflection of my lifestyle. *Positive and negative response(i try to write everything i feel) etc. *What i find more interesting!
WOW, quite cheem. Anyway, very gd idea 2 send some1 a poem on their b'day.
ReplyDeleteI know chinese poem must adhere to PING PING ZE ZE PING PING ZE. Right?
Is yr grandpa touched? I will if i am him.
God Bless
i'm not sure if he is, but you might want to look closely into the terms choosen in this poem, it will be even more interesting than the ping ze
ReplyDeletejuz saw yr reply, i very retarded, care to explain the poems in yr point of view?
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haha, i don't think he's touch, but you shld try looking further, there are more meanings in the word itself (hint:楚辞)
ReplyDeletesorry i can't explain much here, because of the different connotation in it. but you can check this out: 兰芷vs萧艾,宓妃佚女vs飘风云霓. You might be surprise how much meanings a simple phrase can contain.
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